Should there be gun laws in the USA?

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Should there be gun laws in the USA?
INTRODUCTION: 1 phrase ou 2 qui introduisent le thème
In
the USA, the subject of the guns laws is very controversial. I will develop my opinion with
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arguments
of the two sides of the debate
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1st PART : FOR (ou AGAINST)
First
of all, gun control laws will not prevent criminals from obtaining
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guns or breaking laws. If they want to have guns they always could find a way to have
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weapons.
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gun control laws such as background checks and micro- stamping are an
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invasion of privacy because to know the informations required, the people who do
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that have to seek in the past of the person.
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Finally, strict gun control laws do not work in Mexico, and will not work in the
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United States. Indeed we have already try in a country and it doesn't function
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so it won't function in any country.
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TRANSITION : Mais…/ cependant) / néanmoins
However, these arguments are valid but the other side ideas are also realistic so
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they are admissible too.
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2nd PART : AGAINST (ou FOR selon votre 1è partie)
The
first argument of this side is that enacting gun control laws such as
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mandatory safety features would reduce the number of accidental gun deaths.
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They are a lot of accidents caused by guns, and if we do controls the number of
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victims of this kind of accident will diminish.
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Moreover,
more gun control laws are needed to protect women from domestic
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abusers and stalkers. Actually, guys could threaten or indimidate womans with
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guns
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In the end, I would say that more gun control laws would reduce gun
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deaths because criminals or terrorist could use this kind of weapons to
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kill people.
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CONCLUSION:
As a conclusion, I think that there should be gun
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laws in the USA because even if guns have a
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good side, too many horribles things are tied at
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guns. To stop that, guns and guns owner should
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be more control.
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Très bon ensemble avec: bonne structure (utilisation des
mots de liaison); arguments pertinents et bien expliqués; un
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anglais juste et varié, ambitieux. Good job !
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