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l`introduction la description
L'INTRODUCTION prlsentele document,le situedansun contexte'EtledonneI'id6e L'introduction nous du travaitquiva suivre.Dansl'introduction le deroulement g6n6rale.Elleannonce devonstrouverla nature,rorbinedu document,et le thdmeprincipal' To begin with, l'll describethe layoutof the document. First of all, l'll introduce"' The first thing l'd like to say is that "' First,let us consider... MYintroductionwill dealwith "' BYwaYof introduction,I will "' As an introduction,I'd like to "' Beforedevelopingthe main ideas,l'll start with ... I could start with ... I ProPoseto beginwith "' First of all, l'll examine"' The first thing that must be said is that "' We should first consider"' du je d6criraiI'organisation Pourcommencer, document. .'. D'abordje Pr6senterai j'aimerais direest que "' que La premidrechose '.. Toutd'abord,consid6rons traiterade .'. Mon introduction je vais "' En guised'introduction, j'aimerais"' guise d'introduction, En je les Rvantde d6velopper id6esprincipales' ." commenceraiavec avec"' Je pourraiscommencer avec"' commencer propose de Je j'examinerai ... Toutd'abord, La premibrechosed direest que "' "' Nousdevrionsd'abordconsid6rer LA DESCRIPTION La photomontre... ". CettePhotorePr6sente Sur cetteimagenousvoyons". C'estunevue de ..' On voitdeuxjeunesfilles... C'estun dessinde ... images' Elleconsisteen plusieurs Nousavonsune s6riede dessins. Ce que nousavonstciest un dessin humoristique' This Photowas taken from "' Cettephotoa 6t6 Prisede ". d'unfilm intitul6X' This is a shot from a film entitledX' C'estune prisede vue tir6e avecen vedetteY. starringY. .". clairement distinguons Nous "' We can clearlYdistinguish plan, nousvoyons"; ptanid l'arridre premier we can Au In the foreground/inthe backgroundo see... is "' A droite/irgaucheil Y a ... there hand-side On the righVleft gauchevouspouvezdlstlngul In the left-handcorneryou can makeout "' Dansle coin il a ." At the botton/top of the page there is "' En bas/enhautde la Page Y un chien' trouve gauche se A Half waY on the left there's a dog' A mi-hauteur The photo shows .'. This photo PortraYs... On this Picturewe can see "' This is a view of ... Two Younggirls can be seen "' This is a drawingbY '.. It consists of severalPictures' We have a series of drawings' What we have here is a cartoon' En pleinmilieude la photonousne pouvons manquer... A moiti6cach6derridrele bAtimentnous voyons... "' estvisiblement point de convergence Le prds plus nous peu d'un Si nousregardons ... distinguons Je vais6voluerdansle sensdes aiguillesd'une montre. que ... en hautnousremarquons bas From bottom to top we notice that "' De choisies' soigneusement 6t6 The colours have beencarefullychosen' Lescouleursont ... The light enhances... La lumidremeten valeur "' attentivement que nousregardions l'd like us to take a close look at "' J'aimerais que les lignessont It must be acknowledgedthat the lines are On doitreconnaitre essentielles. essential. Let's read the caPtion now' Lisonsla l6gendemaintenant. dit ... The caption reads ... La l6gende l'id6eque ..' souligne Le slogan "' that idea The slogan underlinesthe ... juger l'environnement A en "' Par Judging from the setting ..' en probablement d6roule It ProbablYtakes Placein "' Cecise pouvons nous que voyons, nous From what we see,we can imaginethat "' D'aprdsce que... imaginer nous Tout "' that Ported Penserque '.. EverYthingmakesus think que ... sembleindiquer d6tail Chaque Every detail seems to indicate that "' publicit6 6t6 prisede "' ait que peut cette This advert may have been taken from "' ll se que .'. It createsthe imPressionthat "' Celacr6el'imPression est que ... What catches my attention is that "' Ce qui attiremonattention de '.. This Producesan imPressionof "' CeciproduituneimPression de ." sentiment un traduit entidre L'image "' The whole pictureconveysa feelingof de "' impression produite une est The impressionproducedis one of "' L'impression l'impression photo, on a la When looking at the photo, one gets the Lorsqu'onregarde q u e. . . impressionthat... que '.' avonsI'imPression Nous "' that We'reunderthe impression ... de teint6 It is tinted with ... C'est We mustn't forget the sYmbols' Nousne devonspasoublierles symboles' ... The painter succeeds in portraying "' Le peintrer6ussitd repr6senter semblentsortirde la r6alit6' The charactersseem to be drawn from real Les personnages life. li-dedans. Thereis some humour in it' lly a de l'humour que He seemsto be thinking that "' ll semblePenser ..' He aPPearsto be .... ll sembleOtre... destin6ed "' est probablement This advert is probably intendedto "' Cettepublicit6 message' The document conveYsa message' Le documentest porteurd'un fairesongerle c'est le concepteur que veut Ce What the designerwants is to make the ,.. d lecteur readerthink about ... Right in the middleof the photo we can't mlss... Half-hiddenbehindthe buildingwe can see... The focal Point is obviouslY... lf we look at it more closelYwe can makeout ... l'll moveclockwise. LE PLAN This text could be divided into three parts. This passagefalls into four parts. In my opinion it would be convenientto dividethe text into ... It is importantto see how the text is organized. It would be easierto cut this text into Ce textepourrait6tredivis6en troisparties. Ce passagese diviseen quatreparties. A monavisil seraitcommodede diviserle texte en... ll est important de voircommentle texteest organis6. Ce seraitplusfacilede d6couperce texteen paragraphes. Ce texteest compos6de ... Je diraisquela premidre partieva de ...d ... Les deuxidme, troisi6meet quatridmeparties peuvent6treclairement d6finies. J'aimerais suivrece olan. Le fil conducteur semble6tre... La premidrepartieconcerne... Etudionsd'abordles personnages. D'abordj'aimeraispr6senter... Toutd'abordje vais6num6rerles points principaux. procdderai Je de l'essentielvers les d6tails. Je pr6senterai biens0rchaqueid6e s6pa16ment. J'accorderai uneattentionparticulidre d ... Monassertionseraque ... Je me concentrerai surce qui,i monavis,est essentiel. Nouspourrions trdsbiencommencer notre / analyseavec... Dansle premierparagraphe ... :: Dansle paragraphe suivant... .. .= Les dix premidreslignesnousmontrent... ii Ddsle d6butnouscomprenons ... D'abord,...ensuite... .:,4 -Quelques lignesplustard... g Un peuplusbas... :g Au milieudu troisidmeparagraphe ... € * Quelquesphrasesavantla fin ... :€ rhistext ffr3J"tli;... l'd say the first part runs from ... to ... The second, third and fourth parts can be clearlydefined. I'd like to follow this plan. The leadingthreadseemsto be ... fhe first part concerns ... Let's study the charactersfirst. First l'd like to introduce... Firstlyl'll list the main points. l'll go from the essentialtothe details. Of course l'll presenteach idea separately. l'll pay particularattentionto ... My contentionwill be that ... l'll concentrateon what lthink is essential. We might very well start our analysiswith ... In the first paragraph... In the next paragraph... The first ten lines show us ... Right from the beginningwe understand... First,... next ... A few lines later ... A little fartherdown ... In the middleof the third paragraph... A few sentencesbefore the end ... j .tg . ri* tr :g ,# LE DEVELOPPEMENT C'estun extraitde ... Cet extraita 6t6tir6de ..' Ce textevientdu livre... ." Celaa 6t6 adapt6d'unlivreintitu16 Un filma 6t6faitir Paftirdu livre. ll a et66critil Y a dixansPar... C'estbas6sur une histoirevraie' Le romandontle passageest extraitest '.. Ce textetraitede ... Le passageParlede ... de ... Ce documentPosele Probldme ..' de I'histoire ll raconte de .'. L'auteurabordele Probldme ... L'id6ecentraleestvisiblement questions fondamentales De nombreuses se posent; I'uned'ellesest '.. A difficultquestionarises' Unequestiondifficilese Pose' That'sthe questionthat arises' C'estla questionqui se Pose' This brings us to the questionof Cecinousamdneir la questionde savoir s i . . .o u s i . . . w h e t h e r . .o. r . . ' d ." sommesconfront6s Nous We are confronted with "' est .'. plus frappants les aspects One of the most striking featuresis "' L'undes j'aimerais faire plus loin Beforegoing any further l'd like to remark Avantd'aller que... remarquer that... que .'. I want to Pointout that "' Je veuxfaireremarquer que ... ajouter aussi voudrais I also wish to add that ... Je '.. ici est qui int6resse nous What we are concernedwith here is "' Ce iciest..' What concernsus here is "' Ce quinousconcerne le faitque ". souligner I'd like to underlinethe fact that "' J'aimerais que ..' remarqu6 6galement J'ai ... l've also noticedthat sur ... I'accent mettre l'd like to laYstress on "' J'aimerais de ..' I'importance We must stressthe importanceof "' Nousdevonssouligner que ..' I think it's worth noting that "' Je pensequ'ilestbonde noter de '.. This detail underlinesthe importanceof "' Ce d6tailsouligneI'importance de examin6e d'6tre phrase m6riie Cette This sentencedeservescloser examination' plusprds. It may be assertedthat ... On peutaffirmerque .'. It could be obiectedthat ..' On pourraitobjecterque ..' le h6ros..' As far as the hero is concerned... En ce quiconcerne garder a I'espritque ... devons Nous We must bear in mind that ..' que ... oublier faut Pas One mustn'tforget that "' ll ne notreattention fixions que nous I'd like us to focus our attentionon ... J'aimerais s u r. . . il esttempsde discuterde .'. maintenant Et ... discuss to And now it's time que... This imPliesthat ... CeciimPlique est ... les plusmarquants traits One of the most striking featuresis ... L'undes illustrerce Point. I'd like to illustratethis Point' J'aimerais prendrai un autreexemPle. Je examPle. l'll take another It's an extract from ... This extract was taken from "' This text comesfrom the book... It's beenadaptedfrom a book called "' A film has been madeout of the book' It was written ten Yearsago bY ... It's basedon a true storY' passage comes from is "' The novelthe This text dealswith ... The passageis about ... This documentraisesthe problemof "' It tells the story of ... the problemof "' tackles The author The main issue is obviouslY"' Lots of key issuesarise ; one of them is "' Each ideawill be illustratedby an example. Chaqueid6eseraillustr6epar un exemple. fagond'illustrer ceciest la I can best illustratethis as follows. La meilleure suivante. What prevails over the passageis ... Ce qui pr6vautdansle passageest ... This passageillustrateshow... Ce passageillustrecomment... This text is characterizedby ... Ce texteest caract6ris6 Par... que ... This backs up the assertionthat... Cecirenforcel'affirmation LESINTENTIONS DE L'AUTEUR de l'auteurest I think the author'smain idea is to ... Je penseque I'id6eprincipale de ... de .,. l'intention He probablyintendsto ... ll a probablement de ... estvisiblement His intentionis obviouslyto ... Son intention est de nousconvaincre The writer's purpose is to convince us Le but de l'6crivain q u e. . . that... He stresses that ... l l s o u l i g nqeu e. . . He wants to emphasizethis point. ll veutinsistersur ce point. He insists on that point in order to ... ll insistesurce pointpour... veutfaireest ... Whatthe authorwants to do is to ... Ce que I'auteur que ,.. He makesus realizethat ... ll nousfaitr6aliser que .., quite le fait ll rend trds clair He makesit clearthat ... que ... We' re madeto understandthat... On nousfaitcomprendre He draws our attention to ... ll attirenotreattentionsur ... The author uses devicesto ... L'auteurutilisedes moyenspour... He capturesour attention by ... ll captenotreattentionen ... He arousesour feelings. ll 6veillenossentiments. He appealsto our feelings. llfaitappeld nossentiments. les gensque ... The text aims at convincingpeoplethat ... Le textevised convaincre The author's purpose is to attract our Le but de l'auteurest d'attirernotreattention. attention. purpose de ... His is to convinceus of ... Son butest de nousconvaincre par ... qui est sous-entendu Let's see what is impliedby ... Voyonsce Perhapsit would be more exact to say ... Peut-Otre serait-ceplusexactde dire... r , faireune remarquesur le sens l'd like to commenton the symbolic J'aimerais l symbolique de ... meaningof ... I think this could be interpreteddifferently. Je pensequececipourrait6treinterpr6t6 diff6remment. The authoralludesto anotherproblem. L'auteurfaitallusiond un autreproblbme. : ti As he pointsout... Commeil le faitremarquer,.. .. Accordingto the author... D'aprbsI'auteur... As stated above ... Commeil estdit plushaut... a Thanksto this descriptionwe become GrAced cettedescriptionnousprenons a .$ de ... conscience aware of ... It throws light on ... Celajettela lumidresur ... * This gives us a preciseideaof how ... Cecinousdonneune id6epr6cisesur la fagon dont... ,$ The messagegoes even further. Le messageva encoreplusloin. *€ ,E € de nombreux Throughhis use of numerousadiectives... A traversson utilisation adjectifs... ... By using so many adverbs... En utilisantautantd'adverbes As he uses short sentences ... Commeil utilisedes phrasescourtes... de longuesphrases... By his use of long sentences... Parson utilisation de certainsmots... la r6p6tition a ... GrAce words Thanks to the repetition of certain PERSONNELLE, VOTREOPINION VOS REACTIONS donnermes impressions lwould now liketo give my impressions. J'aimeraismaintenant que ... l'impression '.' J'ai that imPression I havethe After studying this text, I feel as if ..' Aprdsavoir6tudi6ce texte,j'ai l'impression q u e. . . The facts speak for themselves. Lesfaitsse passentde commentaires. It's a controversialissue. C'estunequestioncontrovers6e. Opinionson the subiectmay be divided. ll se peutque les opinionssur le sujetsoient divis6es. It goes without saYingthat ... l l v a s a n sd i r eq u e. . . It is well-knownthat ... ll est bienconnuque ... Everyoneknows that ... Toutle mondesaitque ... PeoPleusuallYthink that ... Lesgenspensent,en g6n6ral,que ... de ce pointde vue,nous lf we look at it from that point of view, we Si nousle consid6rons de Penser ne pouvonsnousemP6cher can'thelPthinkingthat ... q u e. . . que ... reconnu g6n6ralement ll est ... that generally acknowledged !t is que ... gens d croire tendent Les Peopletend to believethat ... penser d ... That makesme think of ... Celame fait ... This remindsme of ... Cecime rappelle ... bienI'auteur lf I understandthe author rightly ... Sije comprends que ... vrai soit ceci admettant ... En true to be this Assuming que qui ... frappe est me What strikes me is that '.. Ce est que ... What is striking is that ... Ce qui est frapPant et drole What tfind both surprisingand funny Ce'queje trouved la foissurprenant e s tq u e. . . is that ... What strikes me as interesting is that ... Ce qui me frappeet me sembleint6ressant e s tq u e. . . ce texteparceque ... aim6 ... J'ai text because I liked this par .,. impressionn6 trds suis I'm very much imPressedbY... Je que ... plus convaincant He'sallthe moreconvincingas ... ll est d'autant He sets out his ideas verY clearlY. ll exposeses id6esde fagontrbsclaire. In my opinion,he sounds very convincing. A mon avis,il esttrdsconvaincant. le passage.,. Takenas a whole,the Passage... DansI'ensemble, qui dds le d6but6tait... int6ress6 m'a What I was interestedin from the beginning Ce was... What I found particularlyhumorouswas ... Ce que j'aitrouv6particulidrement 6tait... humoristique We are shown true-to-lifecharacters.which is attractive. I must say lshare his views. He puts his argumentsforward with accuracy. Allthe descriptionsare acute. He doesn'ttake sides. He remainsneutral. He neverforces his point of view upon the reader. He leavesus free to imagine... I entirelysympathizewith his point of view. The impressionof reliabilitywe get results from... He has a bias(s)edjudgment. He doesn'tseemto be impartial. He doesn't appearto be objective. He doesn'tremainneutral. He takes sides for ... He blendsthe themes. One gets confused. Allthe ideasseemto be confused. The text lacks coherence. His positionis too extreme. His argumentsdon't convinceme. It isn't very convincing. must I I say am not convincedat all. I find it difficultto approveof ... I can't share his opinionwhen he says that... l'm afraid most of his argumentsare wofthless. I don't appreciatethat kind of humour. He alwaystries to justify himself. The centralissue remainsunsolved. The main problemhasn'teven beentackled. The problemis hardlytouchedupon. The main questionisn't even alludedto. It isn't even evoked. He doesn'tsay much about ... He says very little about ... He fails to deal with the most significant aspects. In my opinionhe insiststoo much on ... What lfind particularlyshockingis ... I don't like the way he dealswith ... r6els,ce On nouspr6sentedes personnages qui est attirant. Je doisdirequeje partageson avis. avecpr6cision. ll pr6senteses arguments sontpr6cises. Toutesles descriptions parti. pas prend ll ne ll resteneutre. ll n'imposejamaisson pointde vue au lecteur. ... ll nouslaisselibresd'imaginer pointde vue. parfaitement son Je comprends de fiabilit6que nousavonsr6sulte L'impression de... ll a un jugementqui n'estpasobjectif. ll ne semblepas impartial. ll n'apparaitpasobjectif. ll ne restepas neutre. ll prendpartipour... ll m6langelesthdmes. On s'y perd. Toutesles id6essemblentconfuses. Le textemanquede coh6rence. Sa positionest tropextr6me. pas. Ses argumentsne me convaincent Ce n'estpastrdsconvaincant. du Je doisdirequeje ne suispasconvaincu tout. ... Je trouveditficiled'approuver Je ne peuxpartagersonopinionquandil dit q u e. . . J'ai bienpeurque la plupartde ses arguments ne vaillentrien. pasce genred'humour. Je n'appr6cie ll essaietoujoursde se justifier. Le probldmecentralrestenon r6solu. On ne s'estm6mepasattaqu6au probldme principal. Le probldmeest d peine6voqu6. On ne fait m6mepasallusiond la question principale. Ce n'estm6mepas6voqu6. ll ne dit pasgrandchosesur ... l l d i t p e ud e c h o s e s u r . . . ll ometde traiterles aspectsles plus importants. A monavis,il insistetropsur... choquant Ce queje trouveparticulidrement est ... Je n'aimepas la fagondontil traitede ... qu'ilfaudraits'6levercontre I'm convincedsuch ideasshouldn'tgo Je suisconvaincu id6es. de telles unchallenged. I believehim up to a point. Je le croisjusqu'dun certainpoint. This arousesthe reader'sindignation. Ceciprovoquel'indignation du lecteur. LA CONCLUSION Elle rdsumb votre travail,rappelle les thdmesprincipaux,ouvre de nouvelles perspectives. In conclusionwe can say that ... To conclude,l'll quote ... By way of conclusionlwillfirst Iist the main points again. In my conclusionI'd like to ... All this leadsto the conclusionthat ... To use a famous quotation,I will say that... I can now draw my conclusion. What conclusionscould we draw from all that ? It remainsto be said that ... Of course we must weigh the pros and cons. To sum up, l'd like to compare... All this convergesto show that ... It remainsto be seen whether ... To concludel'll give my personalopinion as regardsthis problem. nouspouvons En conclusion direque ... je Pourconclure citerai... j'6numdrerai En guisede conclusion d'abordi nouveaules pointsessentiels. j'aimerais Dansma conclusion ... que ... Toutcecimdned la conclusion Pourutiliserunecitationc6ldbreje diraique ... tirerma conclusion. Je peuxmaintenant pourrions-nous tirerde Quellesconclusions toutcela? ll rested direque ... BiensOrnousdevonspeserle pouret le contre. j'aimerais Pourr6sumer, comparer ... Toutceciconvergeet montreque ... ll rested savoirsi ... Pourconclureje donneraimonopinion personnelle concernant ce probldme.