Corrigé officiel complet du bac STG-ST2S Anglais

BTN ANGLAIS LV1. SESSION 2011 STG, ST2S.
CORRIGE / BAREME RENT A FRIEND
Ne sanctionnez pas les candidats qui n’utilisent pas les guillemets, ou qui ne mentionnent pas les
numéros de lignes.
Les phrases en gras constituent le minimum exigible
COMPREHENSION SUR 20 POINTS, DIVISE PAR 2 = NOTE SUR 10
I - GENERAL COMPREHENSION: 2,5 POINTS (5 X 0,5 pt)
1) a- an article.
4) b- loneliness.
2) c- the UK.
5) a- buy.
3) b- two people.
II - DETAILED COMPREHENSION: 17,5 POINTS
A- 4 POINTS : 4 X 1 pt (1 ou zéro)
1) R. “… someone you’re paying to be your friend?” l. 2, 3
2) R. “… it has also become big in the US.” l. 15
3) R. “The website rentafriend.com …” l. 16
4) W. “… this alarming innovation to Britain, there is currently no such service
on offer.” l. 18,19
B- 3 POINTS (6 X 0,5 pt)
1) R. “he has never been paid to be someone’s friend before…” l. 20
2) W. “… he found socialising difficult…” l. 22
Accepter aussi : “It actually took a long time to make some kind of contact with
people other than workmates...” l. 22,23
3) R. “… you would never know we weren’t friends…” l.30,31
4) W. “This is Andy," I say. "He’s a real friend” l. 32,33
Accepter aussi : " Sam eyes Andy with suspicion ...." l 35
5) W. “Sam eyes Andy with suspicion …” l. 35
6) W. “There’s no promise of future arrangements.” l. 40,41
C- 4 POINTS (4 X 1 pt)
1) Andy
2) a mate / a friend
D- 4 POINTS (4 X 1 pt)
1) purchase l 12
2) actual l 39
3) the ball/ the football
4) the author and Andy
3) gap l 40
4) future arrangements / arrangements l41
E- 0,5 POINT
“(A few hours later), I have already started to forget what he looks like.” l. 41,42
F- 1 POINT
l. 24,25: “… but when you hire a mate for a few hours I suppose you’re also buying
the luxury of not caring what he thinks about you.”
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G- 1 POINT (2x 0,5 pt)
disturbing (l.15)
alarming (l.18)
III – EXPRESSION: 10 POINTS (20 POINTS DIVISES PAR 2)
LV1 : 2 SUJETS
STG, ST2S (20 points)
-
80 mots :
8 points
-
120 mots :
12 points
STI, STL / 16 points
80 mots
STG, ST2S / 20 points
120 mots : 10
points
80 mots :
120 mots :
8 points
12 points
0,5
0,5
0 ,5
0,5
Enchaînement et cohérence des
idées
2
4
3
5
Correction grammaticale
2
3
2
3
Richesse lexicale
1
2
2
2
0,5
0,5
0,5
1,5
6 points
Respect de la consigne, nombre de
mots
Bonus (prise de risque)
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BTN ANGLAIS LV1. SESSION 2011 STI, STL.
CORRIGE / BAREME RENT A FRIEND
Ne sanctionnez pas les candidats qui n’utilisent pas les guillemets, ou qui ne mentionnent pas les
numéros de lignes.
Les phrases en gras constituent le minimum exigible
COMPREHENSION SUR 24 POINTS, DIVISE PAR 2 = NOTE SUR 12
I - GENERAL COMPREHENSION: 5 POINTS (5 X 1pt)
1) a- an article.
2) c- the UK.
3) b- two people.
4) b- loneliness.
5) a- buy.
II - DETAILED COMPREHENSION: 19 POINTS
A- 4 POINTS : 4 X 1 pt (1 ou zéro)
1) R. “… someone you’re paying to be your friend?” l. 2,3
2) R. “… it has also become big in the US.” l. 15
3) R. “The website rentafriend.com …” l. 16
4) W. “… this alarming innovation to Britain, there is currently no such service
on offer.” l. 18, 19
B- 6 POINTS (6 X 1pt)
1) R. “He has never been paid to be someone’s friend before …” l. 20
2) W. “… he found socialising difficult.” l. 22
Accepter aussi : “It actually took a long time to make some kind of contact with
people other than workmates ...” l. 22, 23
3) R. “… you would never know we weren’t friends …” l.30, 31
4) W. “This is Andy," I say. "He's my friend." l. 35
Accepter aussi: "Sam eyes Andy with suspicion .." l 35.
5) W. “Sam eyes Andy with suspicion …” l. 35
6) W. “There’s no promise of future arrangements.” l. 40, 41
C- 4 POINTS (4 X 1pt)
1) Andy
2) a mate / a friend
3) the ball / the football
4) the author and Andy
D- 4 POINTS (4 X 1 pt)
1) purchase l 12
2) actual l 39
3) gap l40
4) future arrangements / arrangements l 41
E- 1 POINT
“A few hours later, I have already started to forget what he looks like.” l. 41,42
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III - EXPRESSION : 8 POINTS (16 POINTS DIVISES PAR 2)
STI, STL
(16 points)
-
80 mots :
6 points
-
120 mots :
10 points
STI, STL / 16 points
STG, ST2S / 20 points
120 mots : 10
points
80 mots :
120 mots :
8 points
12 points
0,5
0,5
0 ,5
0,5
Enchaînement et cohérence des
idées
2
4
3
5
Correction grammaticale
2
3
2
3
Richesse lexicale
1
2
2
2
0,5
0,5
0,5
1,5
80 mots
6 points
Respect de la consigne, nombre de
mots
Bonus (prise de risque)
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