Corrigé And Justice There is None N° ? Réponses Points

Corrigé
And Justice There is None
N° ?
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Réponses
Moving in + line 40
In England, in London
2
3
a- a girl = the new neighbours’ daughter/ The black girl/ the girl
in the West Indian family/ the West Indian girl
b- her = the main character/ Poppy’s
daughter/ the Polish
girl refuser ‘the narrator’
c- they = the new neighbours/ the West Indian family / the black
family/ the new family
d- he= the main character’s father/ the girl’s father/ the father
e- Poppy = idem
Points
A = 3 b= 3
Cohérence
entre a et b
Sinon 0
Info repérée = 4
inutile de
rédiger
A=2
B=2
C=2
D=2
E=2
4
a- Poppy’s daughter/ the main (female) character // the girl
a- 2 +
Line 13: “it seemed to her” / line 4-5 : “the deep color of the
quotation=1
bittersweet chocolate her mother used for baking” / line 16
“the street seemed suddenly lifeless without them” line 18
(she would tell…) line 23 (yes, there he was)
b- Polish : line 34-35 “the things that reminded him of the old county
b- 2 +
: the smell of…..Polish folk art”
quotation= 1
accepter “men reading Polish newspapers” line 24
enlever 0.5 si
ligne non
précisée
5
She is on her doorstep/ outside her house/ in her street. Accepter
4
aussi inside, at home, behind the window
a- She is both impatient and frustrated. Mais comme le moment
a- 5
n’est pas precise accepter aussi : excited, curious, inquisitive.
b- Line 17-18 : she hugged herself in frustration »/ line 18 :
« she would tell someone, then, but who?” / line 21: “leaping
b- 3 (1.5 si
from the steps, she ran”
un seul
Faire attention à la cohérence entre a et b. + 2 éléments
élément)
suffisent
enlever 0.5 si
6
ligne non
précisée
Then , she goes to the café where her father is a regular patron/
usually is to tell him about the new neighbours/ to talk to him
(because she wants to..)
7
He doesn’t expect to see her there so he wonders what may have
Reaction =5
happened. / He frowns when he sees her come into the café/ He
(4+1
wonders why she is coming/ He asks her if there’s something
expression)
wrong.
He is (easily) worried, rather pessimistic, anxious, concerned. Personality = 5
Line 27: “her father looked up, frowning” / line 278: “What are you
(4+1)
doing here…wrong?” / line 29 “He always thought something was
Quotation = 2
wrong.” / line 29-30: “She supposed he worried so…the war”
enlever 0.5 si
ligne non
précisée
8
9 Right or Wrong?
1- W- line 34- 35 “…till he clung…country”
2- W – line 30-31: “ newly demobbed / had arrived with her
mother “
3- R – line 31 : “determined to put the war…..silversmith”
4- R- line 33-34: “…he had done well. Better than ….in the
café.”
10
11
12
What = 4 (3
comp. + 1
expr.)
What for = 4 (3
comp. + 1
expr.)
Coherence R/W
et quotation
2
2
2
2
à chaque fois ,
-0.5 si ligne
oubliée
She doesn’t want to be heard . She knows that the people around her
6
don’t like West Indians so she fears their reactions. / She is compréhension
embarrassed
2 expression
line 45: The father fears that the newcomers might create problems/
5 comp. + 2
meet the neighbours’ hostility. He may be prejudiced against West
expr.
Indians.
Line 46: Positive point of view + she is impressed. (positive
5 comp. + 2
words + metaphors in the description) line 4, 7-8, 13-14
expr.
(exotic) ,15, 16. I might mean new friends (line 11: “ a girl
(2.5 seulement
about her age”)
si il n’y a pas
d’éléments ou
si il n’y a pas
d’expr. Perso.)
She might feel disappointed at her father’s reluctance, disapprove of
9 compr.
his prejudice. She won’t obey her father. She will try to make new
+
friends with her children.
3 expression