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old hankiesin my Le Creusetsaucepan,nearlyburnedthe housedown.I can'ttell
you howdisgusting
he is.'Ravi'svoicerose.'He strainshis tea throughthe fly-swats,
he neverliftsa fingerto help,he dropsbiscuitcrumbseverywhere,
I cân'tstandhim,I
can'tget any sleep,Paulineand I are quarrelling
all the time,sooneror laterI'm
goingto haveto moveout,I can'tstandit anymore,I thinkl'm crackingup'.
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a fly-swat: a flat object for hitting insects
DeborahMoggach,Ihese FoolishThings,2005
NOTEAUX CANDIDATS
Lescandidats
traiteront
le sujetsur la copiequi
a) respecterI'ordredes questi
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b) faireprécéderles
c) composerdes
rédigerla réponse.
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rotationsur la copie
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COM PRÉHENSION
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a) Listthe characterspresentin the scene.
Ravi, Sonny, the waiter and two men
b) Among them, identifythe main characters.
Ravi and Sonny
c) What are their respectivejobs? (10 words maximum.)
Ravi is a doctor/a male nurse/works in a hospitar. sonny is a
b usiness m an/a trav eIIi ng b usrness m an/a b uslness trave IIer
d) How are they related?(5 wordsmax.)
They are cousins
2 . a) ln which city does the scenetake place?(10 words max.)
The scene fakes place in London
b) Explainin your own wordsthe reasonswhy the main charactersare in this
city.(15 - 20 words)
Ravi probably lives or works in London whereas Sonny is there for
a few days for business (on his way to Frankfurt)
c) where are they exactlyand what are they doingthere?(1s-20words)
They are meeting in the lobby of the Royal Thisile Hotel,
Bayswater. They are talking while having a drink
Focus on the passage from line 1 to line 27.
The narratorporlraysSonnythroughRavi'seyes.
3. What can the readerdeduceaboutSonny'sphysicalappearancein the past?
Answerin your own words usingelementsfrom this passage.(25 wordsmax.)
Sonny was probably/must have been thinner/slimmer, physically
very fit and attractive as Ravi remembers him as .a playboy,
bopping the night away ... starlets.' (lines 10-11)
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4. Describeeach main character'sphysicalappearancenow. (20 words max.)
Now Sonny is rather fat, full of energy whereas Ravi looks
tired/unhealthy/unwell/unfit and has grey hair
5. Focuson Sonny.Pick out sentencesshowingthat:
a) He is noisy.(1 quotation)
'shouting into a mobile'(line 9)/'he barked something into his
phone'(line 16)
(1 quotation)
b) He is authoritative.
'Sonny snapped his fingers at a waiter'(lines 11-12)/'Bacardi and
coke, plenty of ice!'(line 12)
c) He is restless.(1 quotation)
'pacing up and down'(lines 8-9)/'a businesszlan of boundless
energy'(lines 13-14)
(1 quotation)
d) He is self-confident.
'You should try the stuff I use'(lines 20-21)
6. How does Ravireactto Sonny'sattitude?(5 words max.)
Ravi is depres s ed/i rritated/de m o ra Iize
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b) What is he doing?(Givethree elements)(20 - 25 words)
He is watching two men crossing the lobby, thinking of his day at
work and dreaming of checking into a clean hotel room
(option : drinking)
B. What does he decideto do at the end of this passage?(10 words max.)
He decides to tell his cousin about his problems
Readthe whole text again.
9. Does Ravi'sdecisioncome as a surpriseto the reader?Quotethreeelements
to justifyyour answer.
Yes, it does.
'they had nothing in common'(lines 2-3)
'mutual incomprehension'(line 3)
'a man not overly interested in others'(lines 47-48)
10. a) Fourother membersof Ravi'sfamilyare mentioned.
Among them,whichone is Ravi'smain concernat the time of the story?
Ravi's father-in-law
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b) Choosefour adjectivesfrom the list belowwhich best applyto that
characterand justifyeach chosenadjectivewith a quotationfrom the text.
dangerous/ desperate/ caring/ dirty/ uncooperative
/ friendly/
intrusive/ rich
dangerous : 'he set fire to the kitchen'(line 50)
'nearly burned the house down'(line 51)
dirty
: 'boiling up his revolting old hankies'(lines 50-51)
'l can't tell you how disgusting he is' (lines 51-52)
'He strains hrs tea through the fly-swat'(line 52)
'he drops biscuit crumbs everywhere'(line 53)
uncooperative : 'he never lifts a finger to help'(line 53)
intrusive
: 'we can't get rid of him'(line 49)
c) What incidencedoes that character'sattitudehave on Ravi'smood?(10
words max.)
He cannot stand it any more/he's cracking up/he is on the verge of
a breakdown
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tête, mon pauvre.// Tu en fais trop, comme d'habitude ?
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EXPRESSION
Les candidats de la série S choisiront de traiter I'UN des deux sujets au choix
(200 mots).
Les candidats de la série L devront obligatoirementtraiter les DEUXsujets (300
mots au total, soit environ 150 mots pour chaque sujet).
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